This is so sweet it hurts if I had any criticism I'd say the drums sound a little amateur but like that's only if I HAAAAD to criticize otherwise I'd be like YO DIS SHIZ IS DA BOMB
This is so sweet it hurts if I had any criticism I'd say the drums sound a little amateur but like that's only if I HAAAAD to criticize otherwise I'd be like YO DIS SHIZ IS DA BOMB
Thanks :DDD yea i messed up the drums a little i know and i was bored to fix them :P
This is OK, maybe it would help if it had some sort of background ambiance or deeper string chords because it sounds quite empty and a piece that's based on strings usually benefits from sounding fuller!
It's not a bad piece, it's just quite generic I suppose. An original element (some sort of FX or a defining melody) would help it maybe! Like if I wanted to hum this to someone I don't know how I would because it doesn't have a defining melody - see what I'm saying? I dunno, that's just my feeling! :)
I suppose the flute was supposed to be the defining melody, but you're right, it's not exactly fleshed out enough to really be the defining melody in the whole thing.
I didn't give this loop as much attention as other things I do, as it was a small little thing I wanted to put together as I haven't released anything in a while, as I stated above, but I'll definitely keep your criticism in mind should I come back and perhaps make this into a full thing!
Thanks again for your review, I really appreciate it (:
I love this! If I had to criticize it I'd say that while the crescendos are terrific, the less dramatic parts are difficult to listen to, like the lonely-sounding guitar at 2:10 kills me a little bit!
Otherwise the instruments are good, the drums are excellent, and it's nice to listen to.
Thanks for review
Sweet effects! Some parts need a transition instead of abruptly cutting???? I dunno, this is pretty cool!
Thanks!I will do that next time.don't worry
Suffers from poor mastering, particularly difficulty distinguishing between instrument voices and punchy volume here and there. Also a number of the transitions are jarring and repetitive, it's certainly easy to overuse the reverse cymbal sound but I'd suggest you keep away from it a little more!
Smoother transitions and better mastering would make this truly excellent! The melody has a ton of variety and beautiful parts, it's a pity it doesn't sound cleaner.
Thank!! -_- lol
I was still trying the teach myself the ways of FL Studios. Thank you for the feedback. I appreciate it.
Heyo, I produce music using Fruity Loops Studio. I love the art of production, and I'm always eager to learn more. I write electronic tunes that tend not to fit within any genre, and I'd like to say that's my style!
Age 31, Male
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Ryerson
Toronto, Canada
Joined on 9/14/12