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Work on the kick. It needs a lot more thump and maybe less reverb or whatever that effect is that rumble-ifies it? All the other elements are pretty cool, but I feel like it didn't go anywhere. That synth that comes in mid-way just drops out and I was like "dang". Then it came in a second time and did exactly the same thing. Still decent overall though!

Math368 responds:

Thanks for the feedback Brah. The track is not mixed, but did the best on clearing is up. If I get it more crisp, i'll repost it. Thanks mang.

I love the strings! The snare and hihat are annoying tho. It's pretty satisfying for a short song!

Greeksta-69 responds:

Well I can't satisfy everyone but at least you took the time to listen to my musc so thank you.

Every so often I click a totally random user and check their stuff. This is really cool, the faint drums coming in in the beginning and the transition at 0:45 were sweet.

This is so sweet it hurts if I had any criticism I'd say the drums sound a little amateur but like that's only if I HAAAAD to criticize otherwise I'd be like YO DIS SHIZ IS DA BOMB

TastyTeo responds:

Thanks :DDD yea i messed up the drums a little i know and i was bored to fix them :P

Those strings, jesus. And the foreground mid frequency synth thing. mastering isn't 100%?? But forget that, this is beautiful.

Dang this rules! Only thing I've gotta say is that the basic beat, (B = bass drums, S = snare)
is like b---s---b---s---b---s---b---s...
I'm hearing in my head that this would sound great if you used it later on (H = hi hat):
b--hs--hb--hs--hb--hs--hb--hs...

but ye I don't know if I explained that very well or anything. doesn't matter. this song is super clean and awesome!!!

Balls I went and named my song exactly the same thing :'( I like the title too much to change it tho!!

This is sorta cool, love the panning!

Sweet drums, the piano is cool, and the flow is decent! At 0:41 you drop to only one instrument and at 0:55 you bring in only the bass - it sounds a little empty and you may wanna throw in some background ambiance with a bit of high-end? That's all I got :)

This is sick, exactly the sort of sound I like!

Maybe check out my songs too, their styles are different, but they've got the same feel here and there!

Cool transition at 1:35. If I had to criticize this I'd say that the defining synth melodies are sort of annoying, and that the song doesn't have much form to it - it's just permutations of loops being put together! Experiment more with FL and you'll really get a knack for it I'm sure :)

Heyo, I produce music using Fruity Loops Studio. I love the art of production, and I'm always eager to learn more. I write electronic tunes that tend not to fit within any genre, and I'd like to say that's my style!

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